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Yoshi2000- 11-24-2005
Scorpions mistake
here it is it was quik but funny

kasumi ninja- 11-25-2005

funny 8/10

DA MARIO MAN- 11-25-2005

sorry man, but 2/10. no real story, short, pointless, no background, it would have been better if you gave it a story. I bothered to give you a score because that looks like something someone would do if they were horribly bored out of there mind. overall, the concept is great, you should just revise it, give it a storyline, for example, "One day Scorpion and Sub-Zero were teaching they're brother Rain how to do a Fatality" and go on with something like that, you don't have to do that story, but you should still revise it on the levels of 1. a storyline 2. length 3. add some things to it, a background mainly 4. some inspiration overall, this has alot of potential.

Yoshi2000- 11-26-2005

thanks for the advice but i was just bored i wasent accually wanting a good score i just wanted it to be funny!

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